PkMN BTLS Comic- Critique

---- This is based on true story... sorta----

Espeon Paul has written a new song and is about to show it to Lucario John. John mulls it over and give Paul his review; Screaming laughter. This, of course, makes Paul feel less than thrilled as John tries to comfort him.

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Okay, this was SORTA based on true events.

Paul McCartney did write the song "I Saw Her Standing There" and John Lennon did laugh at the lyrics (This is where I got that info [link] )

Although, Paul didn't sulk under a couch, John asked if he was serious and they had to change some of the lyrics.

This is my version of the story, its funnier too! and I mean no disrespect. This is all in good humor.

I am going to try to draw mor comics Involving the pokemontized Fab four, so keep an eye out!


Anyways, this was HECK to do, Like the last picture, I tried to use the pencil tool to do this.. which made it harder to color and yes, I copy and pasted, no regrets <_<

Next picture I color will be back to the basics paintbrush tool.

Overall, this made me laugh outloud, and I rarely do that in my pictures.

I hope you all like it! ^^